Kingpin
by Jason Aaron (writer) and Steve Dillon (artist)
Chapter 5
There's a disconnect between chapters 4 and 5. The scene shifts without explanation. At the end of 4 he is at Don Rigoletto's home about to confront him. At the beginning of 5 Fisk goes home to his apartment and confronts Rigoletto there. No explanation is given for the sudden shift in setting.
This story feels as of it could be told more efficiently. Too many panels are devoted to gruesome violence which doesn't forward the story in any way. After the umpteenth such panel the violence tends to carry less weight.
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